|Reviews for It Would Kill You|
| Silencia 4/28/12 . chapter 3
Wow, I like this story and especially this chapter got me craving for more, excellent cliffhanger XD
I will be eagerly awaiting more
| Shayna-18 9/7/11 . chapter 3
Please! You must update soon! I really like this alot! I love cats by the way lol. I like the characters so far too!
- Shay :D
| devs 6/8/11 . chapter 3
I think this is possibly the most entertaining story I have ever had the pleasure of reading on ficpress. Your writing style is fantastic. Can't wait for more.
| devs 6/8/11 . chapter 2
Omg this chapter had me in stitches. Hilarious.
| Rooffoo 6/4/11 . chapter 3
Whoa talking cat... or a possessed one. Darn now I can't wait for the next chapter for some explanation.
| Vampireacademyrox 6/2/11 . chapter 3
love it plz ud soon XD
| ManiacalByMoonlight 3/13/11 . chapter 1
Oh. This is interesting. I like where this is going. XD.
| Rooffoo 3/9/11 . chapter 2
:O Maybe Porter can see ghosts to or somewhat sense them? Now that would be an interesting fact to find out. I also wonder if Mrs. Lanchester knows something about the ghost's past... More Please :D So many mysteries that I want to find out.
| Cinnamon Cyanide 3/9/11 . chapter 2
An interesting read. I like the characterization of the jealous older brother. Though the romance seems a bit rushed. A girl's got to play hard to get, haha. Though maybe I'm just a bit biased.
Anyhow, you set up some wonderful foreshadowing. That ending was definitely mysterious. I'm curious to know if those Lanchesters will be returning. Guess I'll wait and see.
Good luck with the editing.
| Mistress K. Darq-Chylde 3/8/11 . chapter 2
For a first edit, I think you're doing pretty well so far. I'm curious about who the Lanchesters are, and why the Missus seems more freaked by the house, and Melani, than she should be.
I think you were dead on with your portrayal of David. Like a kid should be: innocent, adorable, and truthful.
Keep plugging along, lady! You can do it!
| Mistress K. Darq-Chylde 3/7/11 . chapter 1
Really liking it so far! I'm working on editing my NaNoWriMo project, as well. Lots of work to be done. P
Good luck, and looking forward to reading more! It's not often that people can effectively pull off a good ghost story.
| Rooffoo 3/4/11 . chapter 1
Ooh I'm already liking this already and it's only the first chapter :D Absolutely can't wait for more