|Reviews for MotionDevotion|
| Inkspilled 3/3/11 . chapter 1
Wow, I loved the allusions to fractions, the ocean and all things unrelated to the topic. Somehow there is so much information given in one metaphor. Beautiful imagery, I really liked it. Good job. :)
| tolerate 3/2/11 . chapter 1
Wow, that was beautiful and somehow depressing, but all in all, I liked it a lot.