|Reviews for My Sister, My Guardian Angel|
| unbornbastard 3/8/11 . chapter 1
AW, someones sentimental.
That unoriginal pitiful excuse for a story shouldn't even be posted. Your writing sucks.
The UnBorn Bastard
| Mikoto 3/8/11 . chapter 1
good prologue. creative writer
| DustyTheCowboy 3/4/11 . chapter 1
I like the concept, and it's cool that you were able to relay so much in such a short chapter, but I'd love to see more to it. It doesn't quite feel like a complete thought, even for the minimalist approach. It's good, but it would be great if there was more.