GOOD SO FAR

Sounds really great! This is my first ever fictionpress that I have ever read!(: I was always reading FanFic!

Please keep updating!

I really do like it! I saw there was another chapter, but realized it was the same. Just letting you know. Dodge is already getting my nerves worked up! lol but it's great so far.

I like where this is going! I dislike Carmen already lol. Describe the characters a little more? Few grammatical errors. It has potential. Update soon! :)