It's getting more interesting. I also like the fact that, even though Scythe is taking on the role of a criminal or a bad guy, he still can't escape that good guy nature of his. I'm impressed with how well you potray that. I can't wait to see how Ms. Lillian Crass plays into this story later on. :)

Hello, i just read all the chapters so far! Awesome! I think his name should be like "The master" or 'mastermind' something like that just sounds good to me. "Phantom"?

The natural curiosity of a detective, I can't wait to see how the detective uses that curiosity to become a criminal. The hunter enters the mind frame of the prey and in turn, becomes the prey for another hunter. I love this concept and hope to one, write a story using it. However, I prefer to read them over writing them right now. Great job as always. : )

I like it. I had no idea Kastro was so young, but it does make picturing him easier. It's very descriptive and well written.

I like it. I came up with few possible titles, mostly based on the summary though.

1) Mastermind

2) Double Agent

3) Two sides to a Coin

4) Dirty Cop

5) The Tables Turn