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| Reviews for Delivered Straight to Your Door |
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   ImmanenceEnsured 12/12/12 . chapter 19This story made me smile way too many times:) Awesome job |
| ImmanenceEnsured 12/11/12 . chapter 3 "Jason was scheming. He was plotting. At that moment, if he owned a pet, it would be a White Persian. -and he'd be stroking it sinisterly." Every single line in this story just WORKS! You have such a lively imagination, and the way you describe things is amazing, few words but you convey the exact right image. I'm totally excited to see where this is going. |
| Laser Panties 11/27/12 . chapter 15 O_O Wut. This...this is more confusing than ... wut WUT |
| Aynon 11/26/12 . chapter 18 I thought this was a great comedy, well paced, especially loved the first half where it was pure dialogue. I think there were two things that stood out to me: 1. When the same person continued speaking in the next sentence, I think the punctuation was wrong (although I might have mistaken who said what). The proper punctuation would be: "Jason talks "Jason talks some more" "Now Drew talks" 2. The shift from dialogue to actions was a little jarring. Apart from that, I really loved this story. It was very light and humorous, and I really appreciated how you didn't require descriptions of emotions to show the actual emotions. I also loved how the simple dialogue could show so much about what was happening. Good work! |
| Life's Unexpected Turns 11/9/12 . chapter 19 They are such a sweet couple! And your work is amazing! So adorable. Have you ever read the series Howl's Moving Castle by Dianna Wynne-Jones? To me, Jason and Andrew remind me of Howl and Sophie. Pay me no mind if you haven't read it. Amazing story! Great job :) |
| xSadistxFujix 4/12/12 . chapter 1 ...I don't even know what to say except omfg. -falls over laughing- THIS IS BRILLIANT! Work of pure genius. |
| bbbee 4/1/12 . chapter 19 This was really kind of hilarious. Lovely characters and charming dialogue. The plot...eh...well, it was fun ;) Thanks for sharing! hugs |
| someplacenice 2/23/12 . chapter 19 I love this story so much. It's just so cute and rather funny in the most perfect way. And I love the relationship between Andrew and Jason. It's so realistic and amazing, I love it. Simply amazing. Well done :D |
| SmilingWave 2/20/12 . chapter 2 Re-reading this and the spaghetti part never fails to amuse me. |
| CharlieTehUnicron 1/14/12 . chapter 1 Hilarious! |
| pygmy owl 12/11/11 . chapter 19 Totally loved this story! :) |
| Dream-of-Fairies 12/11/11 . chapter 19 Good ending Very appropriate I think xDD |
| Dream-of-Fairies 12/11/11 . chapter 2 Bwahahaha "So is spaghetti until u cook it" Totally going to be one of my quotes from now on and im not even gay Just a lovable fag-hag Woo great great |
| Miyuki31393 10/26/11 . chapter 1 I cant believe Jason! XD |
| spoonring 9/26/11 . chapter 19 totally cheerful story man. faved! and im checking out your author profile too! |
