|Reviews for Delivered Straight to Your Door|
| ImmanenceEnsured 12/12/12 . chapter 19
This story made me smile way too many times:) Awesome job
| ImmanenceEnsured 12/11/12 . chapter 3
"Jason was scheming. He was plotting. At that moment, if he owned a pet, it would be a White Persian.
-and he'd be stroking it sinisterly."
Every single line in this story just WORKS! You have such a lively imagination, and the way you describe things is amazing, few words but you convey the exact right image. I'm totally excited to see where this is going.
| Laser Panties 11/27/12 . chapter 15
This...this is more confusing than ...
| Aynon 11/26/12 . chapter 18
I thought this was a great comedy, well paced, especially loved the first half where it was pure dialogue. I think there were two things that stood out to me:
1. When the same person continued speaking in the next sentence, I think the punctuation was wrong (although I might have mistaken who said what). The proper punctuation would be:
"Jason talks some more"
"Now Drew talks"
2. The shift from dialogue to actions was a little jarring.
Apart from that, I really loved this story. It was very light and humorous, and I really appreciated how you didn't require descriptions of emotions to show the actual emotions. I also loved how the simple dialogue could show so much about what was happening. Good work!
| Life's Unexpected Turns 11/9/12 . chapter 19
They are such a sweet couple! And your work is amazing! So adorable. Have you ever read the series Howl's Moving Castle by Dianna Wynne-Jones? To me, Jason and Andrew remind me of Howl and Sophie. Pay me no mind if you haven't read it. Amazing story! Great job :)
| xSadistxFujix 4/12/12 . chapter 1
...I don't even know what to say except omfg. -falls over laughing- THIS IS BRILLIANT! Work of pure genius.
| bbbee 4/1/12 . chapter 19
This was really kind of hilarious. Lovely characters and charming dialogue. The plot...eh...well, it was fun ;) Thanks for sharing!
| someplacenice 2/23/12 . chapter 19
I love this story so much. It's just so cute and rather funny in the most perfect way. And I love the relationship between Andrew and Jason. It's so realistic and amazing, I love it. Simply amazing. Well done :D
| SmilingWave 2/20/12 . chapter 2
Re-reading this and the spaghetti part never fails to amuse me.
| CharlieTehUnicron 1/14/12 . chapter 1
| pygmy owl 12/11/11 . chapter 19
Totally loved this story! :)
| Dream-of-Fairies 12/11/11 . chapter 19
Very appropriate I think xDD
| Dream-of-Fairies 12/11/11 . chapter 2
"So is spaghetti until u cook it"
Totally going to be one of my quotes from now on and im not even gay
Just a lovable fag-hag
Woo great great
| Miyuki31393 10/26/11 . chapter 1
I cant believe Jason! XD
| spoonring 9/26/11 . chapter 19
totally cheerful story man. faved! and im checking out your author profile too!