"i get lost/ in the sleep/ i missed;" that line is - i can't even. i mean, it's perfect

Ooh...very haunting. I like the way it flows, with one stanza easily transitioning into another, though there still pretty distinct. Very deep. Personally, my favorite part is "in the time when your eyelashes brushed over my skin." Well done.

This is really good! I love your discriptions, they really make you think, amazing!

gorgeous. the 2nd & 4th stanzas are my favorites,

I enjoyed the description in this. My favourite line would have to be the last, I love everything that it holds.

very nice. the lonliness of this man, or woman, is perfectly pictured - i liked the analogy of the walls and windows knowing what had gone on. i'd say grade a, personally. no, a.

Beautiful, parts of this make me really sad. Feels like a hole. Guess that's a good thing, that your words have that kind of power

amazing imagery. it would be terrifying to sit in a room of such memories i think..

very well done.