I just moved to LA, so this poem caught my eye. I really enjoyed it. Good job. :)

I thought it was a bit repetitious with sun in the beginning and the word valley. It just seemed a bit much. I might try to get rid of some of that. I also thought the formatting with the last valley was a bit over the top. The rest of the piece was well done especially because the descriptions are really well done.

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I agree, city can be too drama n nature is a way to get yourself new :)