Amazing!

It was really cute, and true, mind you. Touche, man!

Great job!

StoryMonster

haha genius! I enjoy these witty little poems, they always brighten my day.

-William

Cute! Realistic too, there are tons of writers that really should be published, while others (Stephanie Mayer) should just be forbidden to write at all. Interesting piece, and though the rhyming scheme was ordinary, you pulled it off well!

x mandy

review marathon, link in my profile!

haha touche! I like that.

Don't be so blunt..

This, I like.

Awesome!

Lol, an audience pleaser. :)

I love this one.

SirScott

This is very witty! I had a ball reading this. I think the poetry you get on FP is better than some of the published works of today and stuff you see at poetry slams. Ah, long live fictionpress!

The only thing I have to pick at is the fourth line. I felt the fourth line stopped a little short in terms of rhythm in comparison to the third line.

lol, but only things that ARE fit to print are printed on fictionpress. Honestly, do you know how many Danille Steele books I shelf at the library. Only things that are fit to print are printed on FP. lol

so true, there's so much writer wannabes

And here I was wondering why a good writer like you is publishing his work on FP ;P

Write something like twilight and the next day you're a phenomenon.

I liked the poem, but you're too humble x)

Haha (that is my feeble attempt to show that I am laughing). And I still am laughing. I liked this, I really did.