Wow, nice and satirical. :)

I like this- it is a very different friendship poem.

Hahaha, I like this a lot. Made me smile.

Wowwww... I had a 'friend' like that
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This could be angsty as well as funny...loved it XD

I love this! Perfectly sarcastic, and true. :)

great job! i really got the feel of what you were saying. hey, i would bve etstatic of you read and reveiwed my story, Home for the Normal Impaired. I dont want to seem like i'm fishing for reviews of anything. Great job!

SO TRUE! I know i would always believe and trust a "bf"

but it always turns out wrong. I really enjoyed the poem tho!

now why wasnt this poem around when i met those twerps in freshman year or even sixth grade? lol loved it.

lol it was funny

hahaha.. this is a bit funny!

Awesome poem girl sounds like me lol XD except for the advise part, love the poem

Awesome how you made this so realistic. It ends with the basis of how we should be careful about how we choose our friends, and be careful as to who we trust. Ironic piece though; it's a perfect description as to what characteristics should NOT be in a bf!

x mandy

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"about you in parties."... at parties.

The writing here isn't great and grammar not so much either like it should be 'n' and your in the boyfriend line.

I thought the repetition with the B my bf got a bit repetitive. I might do two of the other lines to that one line. But I did think the repetition of I'll promise and certain other words worked well.

The piece itself was funny. Definitely a great description of what a bf should not be... lol.

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Sorry for the late review. I got this email a couple of days ago but i had zero time to read&review until now. so...i loved this! good job! :) it was funny but had this sad undertone about it too(which worked really well.) amazing job once again

This poem would be amusing if the grim irony wasn't so true. Probably many of us have had bfs like that, before we learned to be more careful about choosing friends. Good work

P.S.-Thank you for reviewing my limerick.