Wow... That was very good work! I loved the emotion in it. And as always your opening lines are amazing! They really deliver your exact thoughts and set the pace for the rest of the poem :)

Lovely work.

You ended on a great note to. 'To cage a free bird like you would simply be wrong.'

Beautiful imagery. Amazing how just a few words express so much! :)

I loved it.

Two people in love, but with completely different goals and dreams. The last line was simply amazing. The message it sends is unmistakable and timeless, the classic "If I changed you, you wouldn't be you."

Well done.