This is so good I have just read a couple of your poems and I love the descriptions you use, you see things with a different perspective and I love it

I wish this had more structure to it. There were clear places where the topic changed and there could have been a stanza break, so it felt strange not to have one. Punctuation might have helped sort your ideas, too.

I do love the images of this. On top of the central one, "rhymes and rainbows," you have a lot of smaller ones, such as the flying, the fairies, the sparkling clothes, etc. It's all these little things that make piece so strong.

Sparkles from the Review Marathon (link in profile)

My god, I am speechless.

..."Flower fairies..." :D

Yeah, I'm having a spazz attack right now.

this was utterly beautiful... excellent job... i LOVE it..