That's a sweet tribute I like the story… *hugs*

I like the way you described the feelings and reactions here… Nice job!

From every one of these I could actually feel the emotion myself. The only reason I didn't review every chapter is because I can't think of enough things to say, because every chapter is flawless in my eyes. Great job!

I love this line, "If they saw me now... well, they will, in an hour or so, but it will be too late." I also love how you put exhilarating after chilling and freezing, which you would normally think of as being negative. I don't know if you should include "In doing so, I lose all my breath instantly. I expected it to be cold, but not this cold." It kind of disrupted the sense of freedom. I like it very much :)

I like the way you showed the importance of the language here, and the desperate, pleading little girl. Nice job!

There's something about this that's really...inspiring. They're short, but sweet, and they each have their own lessons. It makes me think of how people always tell us that quality is over quantity. You know?

Anyway, I really like these. :) Very unique way of story-telling, but very effective. Oh, and very well-written to boot. It sucks that people on this site tend to skip over stories like these because they're only interested in romance or angst or some epic action story. I think normal, everyday stories can be just as good, if not better. :)

I'll be following this story...er, collection of stories. Keep it up!

DoMiKaT

Since I already read this one, I'll review right away. These little drabbles have really touched me. The angst is raw and pure, and yet this last chapter was so liberating and heartening. I think it appeals to a side in all of us that craves freedom and relief. I can't quite explain it, but it really moved me. I look forward to more chapters :)