|Reviews for What the Cows Knew|
| bewareoftheturtles 3/15/11 . chapter 1
i really liked this. i love all the descriptions. and i love the last line especially.
| PROFILE NOT ACTIVE 3/13/11 . chapter 1
I love the story the poem tells... Keeping it direct and straight to the point.
The fact that the rhyming words come from the first and fourth line of each stanza doesn't upset the flow.
The final line is a killer: 'That felt like a thunder storm from my eyes'. Fantastic choice of words!