I can't believe I almost missed that one due to some stupid alert. I'm not very fond of this site. Anyhow, that was lovely and very intriguing. So this is where Sean ends up after Julian is out of the picture. I must say a little pang went through me reading the part about him picking up the pieces...I loved the tension between the two of them and especially Isaiah's conflict.

Looking forward to more of this promising start!

I always love this type of plot, and i love it even more when it's written so well :D can't wait for the next chapter :3

((sigh)) I've been having such a shitty week. And so, to feel better, I was going to re-read some of my fav. scenes from Lone Star. And then I saw that you had a new story posted and I was like 'omg, thank you Jesus.'

I LOVE your writing. I also really like how you switch perspectives in this story between Isiah and Sean. And the tension Isiah has between who he wants to be and who he is is just fantastic.

I'm really looking forward to seeing where you take this!

It's a good start. I don't really know what to expect plot-wise so you have me intrigued. Update!