Wow - the summary is just like BANG drama. I really like you're writing - it's simple and to-the-point and very authentic to life. Keep up the great work

Soph xx

I like this story, I really do. I like how he's not giving up on Darcy. I also like the fact that you gave Darcy a background - a reason why she is the way she is.

The only critique I have with this story, is some of your wording isn't right...like,

"How to do you all these stuff?"

There's a few errors in the story similar to that, but as for the plot and everything, i'm loving it!