Very, very good job with this. Interesting perspective on such a tough topic. It's always good to see things from the other side. It's like "Symphony for the Devil." Makes you think, for sure!

It was really interestingly done, a unique concept. It was well written in good format. I like the progression within the poem, how it moves through the journey. Although it seemed a little long (to my short attention span), there was always another important point in each stanza. Very insightful and clever, nice work. :)

wow. it is like an evil monster. i've seen it in my mom.

it's like a possession. full of venom. it was like reading a message from a demon. scary