|Reviews for Alone|
| lookingwest 3/19/11 . chapter 1
From the Review Game's Review Marathon (link in my profile)
Loved the line endings and where you decided to split those, I think you did a good job adhering to the haiku form and I liked that. I liked how you juxtaposed the idea of "alone" and then you used the last line as "busy" because the contrast was interesting and I enjoyed how you played with those two opposites. Also spoke to me-positive poem, I think-get out and see the world and try new things, so I liked the meaning as well.
| tolerate 3/17/11 . chapter 1
I like this
| Allyson Parker 3/16/11 . chapter 1
Yay! first to review! Yay! whoho! Okay I'm finished. This is good! Um...
Yeah! First to review WHOHO! okay now I'm done XD.