Secretive Person, how can you put two chapters of another story into this story? I'm very, very disappointed in you.:'(

I know that I am the one who wrote/ typed this story but I am here to point out my error. In the first paragraph there is a name Suzuko, it's supposed to be Zenan

Most of this chapter is in dialogue form... That's odd

Wow, Hikaru must be real pissed.

Dear Secretive Person,

I don't believe anyone can have blue hair.:

But, I like this chapter. Hikaru is awesome.:P

Hey, Nyka, I have an idea: WHY DON'T YOU MAKE HARU'S FATHER DIE AND MAKE HIKARU HARU'S OFFICIAL GUARDIAN?

Hikaru is a better guardian than Haru's father.:/

With All Due Respect,

TheMockingjay.

Have the next chapter updated, NOW.

Is his bodyguard going to be abusive towards Haru too?

Will Haru be able to go on good terms with his teacher?

This is a really short chapter, I doubt that there are more than a thousand words.

You should have Haru be able to successfully run away from that monster demon of a father

How can it be possible for Haru's father to drive so fast without the police arresting him and give him a traffic ticket?

You could really be more specific about the mother, and also, you should introduce her to the story.

How is it possible for him (Haru) to have a fever of forty-six degrees celius?

You should have Haru go on the baseball team.

Cool. I have just reviewed my own story. AWESOME!