|Reviews for Lovesick|
| Stormfeather 10/30/11 . chapter 1
Another amazing poem. I love it.
| Reel Wander 7/16/11 . chapter 1
Family can do that to you, love them, yet, they are the source of your pain
their action/decisions not only affect them, but affect people around them
| EvilEmoElmoKillsSanta 3/26/11 . chapter 1
Yet another wonderful poem. I love it. It's lovly.
| simpleplan13 3/19/11 . chapter 1
I like this. The combination of emotions in here is really great.
I didn't like the rhyming so much. A lot of it sounded forced and safe/made doesn't really seem to rhyme well at all.
I also like how it could apply to different situations with different people you might love. Nice job.
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| Ice Bubble 3/17/11 . chapter 1
Soo sad! This poem expresses feelings amazingly. Very good. I hope everything works out. :)
| Archia 3/17/11 . chapter 1
The rhyme in this is really well down so the whole poem flows really well. I like the simpleness of this, but then, the rhyme makes it mroe complicated.