|Reviews for Ribbon|
| Hisa-Ai 3/18/11 . chapter 1
A little vague. I was expecting a little more detail, but since it's poetry, it works as is.
| The Wandering Musician 3/17/11 . chapter 1
Very interesting! This poem leaves me wanting to know more. I feel like a little more information (why the missed person isn't around now, their relation to the speaker) would really help build the emotion of the piece. Good job! I enjoyed reading it.