Really good! post soon!

This is such a great story - I hope there will be more. You really write dialogue between men and women so well. It's been a while since I've had the time to read one of your stories. I really missed them!

If I had one suggestion, it's more of a thought - the dialogue is great but having her recall it all sort of distances the reader a little. Having it happen "as it happens" might make it even more powerful!