That was an interesting beginning to this story. I like it so far.

love this chapter, Michael is a bit annoying but I like the way you've characterized him, it makes sense ]. hope you put the next one up soon, and thanks for the review, makes me feel less of a failure now my story actually has one lol.

i think this story is really interesting. i wonder who will be rhe's love interest? i hope its the demon, i dont know why:)

I haven't read your last story but so far i think this one is brilliant. I cannot wait for the next chapter, and that poor little girl.