| Reviews for Mutilated Sticker Corpse |
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YasuRan 3/21/11 . chapter 1This is some unique imagery you have going on: while I have read descriptions on certain people being like stickers you can't rip off, I haven't heard them being referred to as 'mutilated sticker corpses' like they are here. I also like that you went into detail on how they cling and why the narrator allows them to return ('Enough remains/To annoy/And allow/The connection to reform'). It helps create a whole, clear picture of the relationship. Well done :) |
dragonflydreamer 3/20/11 . chapter 1Haha, this was so cute! You had a pretty serious tone, so there was a message that you were able to get across, but I was smiling the whole time at the "mutilated sticker corpse" analogy. Very creative and quirky! [Enough remains/To annoy/And allow/The connection to reform] Great lines. So true on both subjects. [,it doesn't matter in what way,] Just a typing glitch with that first comma there. Sparkles from the Review Marathon (link in profile) |
Evilives 3/18/11 . chapter 1That was good short truthful insightful frank ...In short, your specialty. :) |
SargentLooneyPencillazy2login 3/18/11 . chapter 1 cute! and true! |