Wow they was so emotive! I felt like I knew who 'he' was! I was so worried for him which obviously means your poem was very powerful and emotive which I think many people may be able to relate to!

That was beautiful. Very well done.

HEY! i lost someone dear to me 2 days ago.. the poem suits the whole thing except that he wasn't 20 when he died.. the last stanza was super comforting... D... great job!

This made me cry a little actually. Putting all the grammer issues and spelling mistakes aside, it was a heart-wrenching piece and you can really feel the loss within it. The first three lines really hit me hard, but they were well written lines. Beautiful piece. Well done.