OK I'D LIKE TO POINT OUT THAT THIS IS MY STORY I JUST CANT SUBMIT THEM YET SO IM HAVING MAXINE DO IT FOR ME SO I HAVE THE CHAPTERS SO YEA... :) and it makes me happy that someone read it

I really liked the chapter!

You said you need characters. Here are a pair of twins. Gabriella 'Abbie': Abbie is a hyperactive fourteen year old dancer.

Alessandra Marie: 'Nessa': Nessa is the quiet one of the twins. She likes to write and draw. Abbie calls her 'Ali Mae' and in return she calls Abbie, 'Rella'. Nessa likes to be outside in the snow.

Both girls have elbow length, slightly wavy, chocolate brown hair and brown eyes and slightly tan skin. Nessa is taller than Abbie is. Abbie will only be 5'3" as an adult, while Nessa will be around 5'6" or 5'7".

Let me know if you'd like to use them, and if you need more information. Keep writing, and update soon.