Loved the simplicity in this because I think though there are only two sentences, they speak volumes and can mean many different things to many people. I also liked that the two sentences were on one line because it created more of a prose feel than a poetry feel and I feel like there's a bit of ambiguity in them, kind of similar to the last piece! Also, could relate to this-it's nice to see something positive for a change in poetry prose. Especially on FP.

From the Review Game's Review Marathon (link in my profile)