Wow! The poor boy!

You write very very well, I think Chaos is going to have a tough time playing judge! XD

P Guess I should write one too even though I did talk to you about it earlier. I realized something after rereading it just now. You only mentioned the word Daddy once, but the word Mommy was mentioned four times. Love it! It helps add to the overall atmosphere.

It shows the distancing very well. I thought over the ending and I must say I'm impressed. Even to the end, there is still room for speculation.

The other thing that I liked was the fact that you were descriptive but you didn't describe the characters in detail. It helps to emphasis their current emotions and their relationship.

Sorry I wasn't able to spot them earlier. But I still stand by what I said about the age though. x.X And I wait to be corrected. *still feels bad* Hope you get more reviews! x3 Saw Rae's review for your fic!

- Basil

Wow. ._. That about explained all my thoughts on this. Wow. It's very tragic. :( And you did it so well.

Great work, Comma, sorry I'm not the best reveiwer. ;

Rae