|Reviews for The Darkness|
| Compton 3/20/11 . chapter 1
Ok, this is your choice, but next time, I would separate the chapters into actual chapters, not all just one page. I makes it easier for a lot of people.
Also, always spell out numbers, that is really important.
Other than that, nice description which I like because it helps me really see your story like a movie. Good work!
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