good start, i like it

so at first i was confused..but its a good start to a story. i like it, cant wait to read more

This is so action-packed and suspenseful. I really like where you're taking it. The names like Amabel and Kirian are all really original, and you're an awesome writer.

Soph xx

Wow, this seems really interesting. The summar definitely attracted me and this prologue is quite well written. Keep it up!

Soph xx