| Reviews for Time Alone |
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Ibbit 9/25/12 . chapter 5I can't tell if I like it or not that Mark keeps comparing how he felt about his happy-fun-time moments with Sandy early in their, ahem, relationship to his now feelings. I'm pretty sure it's a yes, cause I mean come on! It's Mark. I like everything Mark. (Wow that almost sounds school-girl scary. Next thing you know, underwear sniffing) (where is my mind going?) this is going much slower than many other stories that are very "I love you! Lets have sex on the first date if we can even call it a date! Okay!" I very much approve. They end too quick and have a lot of "omgiamgoingtocrynow" or etc moments. Though you're killing me with all this waiting. And then you saying that you're not done with the next part? When I've been reading MarkxRogers for the last two days straight? (Hah, straight) God. What am I going to do now? Rage on your review page, obviously. (I hope you understand my humor by now, cause I know for a fact that I freak people out) Excluding the first actual story, my favorite would have to be the birthday one. But I'm a sucker for a good awkward smutty fic too, don't worry. I'm glad you put in the last chapter, so we can all see how it changes them and how the rest of the world reacts to their bubbliness. This whole thing made me snicker more times than I'm willing to admit. I'm just glad my cat was next to me to keep me in check from going full fangirl-mode. Ugh, that would have been embarrassing. Luck with life stuffs. Hope you write again soooooon. Only because you're good, not that I'm addicted or anything. Ahem. ibbit! |
Raaawr Ima Dinosaur 11/13/11 . chapter 5Ahaha I simply loved this! Although, every time Mark thought "I just had sex with Rogers" I pictured him dancing around they room, singing the song "I just had sex" lol... Great job on this :D |
irishmidori8 10/28/11 . chapter 5Oh. My. Gosh. How did I miss that you had posted? Major brain fart but hey, whatever. On to the review! (Long Overdue) Okay, my absolute favorite part of this chapter was the image of Mark with his big, loud, lit-up "I had sex with Rogers" sign. That image was priceless. :D Hm? Are we going to hear from Emily again? And what about Frank? Is he really going to show up at Rogers' house? Ick, that guy makes me want to pull out my hair! Writing wonderful as always. :D I love the sense of being in Mark's head (even if Mark wants out of its Sandy-centered awkwardness). Also, I'm really loving Mark's character development. I can even sense some change in Sandy. ;) Will they be separated that summer? :( That'd be so sad! Especially if it has to do with Frank and his blah-ness. Can't wait for more! Hope to see you start another installment! This one was hilarious! Happy writing! Irishmidget8 |
Draco volans 10/22/11 . chapter 5Overall a cute story. Good job. |
Draco volans 10/22/11 . chapter 1Extremely good job here. It reads really well, and feels like you've cut out all the unnecessary crap, and got right to the point. Well done. :) |
loverofnight 10/14/11 . chapter 5Great story once again, I really hope you write more of these two characters. Mark and Sandy are my favorite characters I just love this story and have read them a few times and will continue to do so :) cant wait to see what you come up with next |
rhythm within 10/1/11 . chapter 5I hope you do write another story. I really enjoy these two characters. And your writing in general. (: |
Junjou-Angel 9/28/11 . chapter 5wooop! Mark is finally learning! *pats his back* bravo! |
Lerene 9/26/11 . chapter 5Mark and Sandy's conversation about growing beards made me laugh. It was ratter cute. It was a great chapter. I'm very curious about this next story you may or not write. |
GreyShadow 9/26/11 . chapter 5These two are some of my favorite characters I hope there's more to read about sometime! |
Guest 9/26/11 . chapter 5 Soooo good and cute, as usual! *Thank you* for the post! I really do hope you write more stories about them at some point. Although this ending was very satisfying (esp. in the way it hinted to the future), I doubt I'll ever get enough of these boys! |
tell it to the sky 9/26/11 . chapter 5arrrr! i love Mark and Rogers, and I'm sad to see that there story is ended. but hopefully you will continue with it soon! |
thelastfloorup 9/25/11 . chapter 5You have such great characterization. AMAZING. I love this. Keep up the great work. I really hope that bit that your iffy about writing for this story, gets written. I just can't let this story go. It's just to good. |
understand 9/25/11 . chapter 5Every time I'm done reading a chapter I always try to add it to my favorites, only to realize it's already there... |
Poptart Guava King 9/25/11 . chapter 5AHA. I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS AWKWARD TALK FOR EVERS. |