Nice stream of conciousness an shifting points of views. You used some awesome metaphors and similes in here.

That was a rather fantastic story. I never thought of the tale of Persephone as being Romantic, and you did a great job of portraying it as such. That was probably an abstract compliment; I tend to do that. I just adore this story, lol.

Cute :D One of my close friends played Hades in a short play involving the story of Hades and Persephone, but it was a comedy, so it's really sweet to see a more detailed, possibly even darker side of the story. It almost seems as if it were spoken from Hades' eyes himself. Short, but sweet. I could really see this becoming something longer though. Great work