I'm sorry I didn't review before, but I wanted to read the whole thing first and I couldn't read it all at once.
let me start off by saying that you are amazing; this is such a gripping and wonderful story, I wish more people would read and review.
I can only find two very, very minor things wrong: one, memoria is a bit of a mary sue but only in the slightest she does have her faults.
two, you tend to switch point of view without warning, may I suggest you start marking the switches in bold letters like: "john's POV."
but other than that, I love this so much, it's my favorite story. I love ferox, and luke, and I can't wait to see what is going to happen with broslin.
long live the elementist's
eylandria13

Oh my gosh! Such a good chapter! You have such an amazing mind! Truly a gifted! I get so totally engrossed in your writting it rediculas! Please update soon! I'm on the edge of my seat waiting to find out what happens next! Thank you for the up date :)

This story is unreal! Amazingly written and the plot is outstanding! Please update soon :)

I really enjoyed this first chapter! Firstly, the grammar and spelling as far as I could see were impecable which shows that you put a lot of work into this. I love the setting with the mix of sci-fi and fantasy. I also like how well you have incorporated your made-up terms like the 'Reason'. I can't wait to see where this story goes!

-Aventurine