|Reviews for Coney Island|
| Faithless Juliet 3/26/11 . chapter 1
This one was much more intimate and condensed then the last one. The adventures of these radical children in a surreal world of the carnival.
You really have a strong way of describing scenery – the iron gates, summer nights ghosting, ocean hushed, it sounds very New Englandy.
P.S. if your having trouble with your line breaks (you might have meant it to be this way) but try and hit SHIFT while you hit ENTER to go to the next line, that works for me when I post stuff, otherwise it arranges it with an extra line in the middle.
| Bonjour Skitty 3/24/11 . chapter 1
Interesting format and prose. The material was darker than I imagined it would be, which came as a pleasant surprise. Excellent descriptions too. My favorite had to be "carnival face," because it just sounds so eerie, reminiscent of "It."