|Reviews for don't wake me|
| classic violet 4/12/11 . chapter 1
I love this. Every line is beautifully written. I love the last stanza especially. and 'i feel safe in my thoughts', I completely relate to that. The diction is gorgeous. Brilliant poem.
| cab fed hig 3/24/11 . chapter 1
"not even the hope
that I'm dreaming" repressive reveries of self discovery. it's so intriguing
| Poisoned Twinkles 3/23/11 . chapter 1
I love the enjambment you used with the last line of each verse as you connected it to the next verse. I could relate to this poem, too, and it is quite lovely with the words you used to describe the so-called 'hibernation'.