|Reviews for slingshot|
| simpleplan13 7/14/12 . chapter 1
"my life is like an elastic"... an elastic what? I feel like elastic seems more like an adjective here. Maybe get rid of the an? Or even just "my life is elastic" that seems kinda more powerful to me also...
"cause every time I"... 'cause
I like the piece though. The idea of life being elastic and slingshotting you worked really well. Nice job!
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| punctured.lungs 5/9/11 . chapter 1
I love this one.
| classic violet 4/12/11 . chapter 1
I love the analogy of life like an elastic. and I especially love the second and last stanzas. Great poem.
| Michael Kelso 3/23/11 . chapter 1
Well done. I don't do much freeform, I usually rhyme. But this is a very visual poem, I can see the images to go with the words.