*jumps up and down* Update! Update! Update!

Can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Peace, Love and Happiness! :)

Bubbly Girl

Oh I can't wait for more. First 2 chapter already had me hooked. Such an interesting premise that I've never seen done before. Update soon please.

The perfect time to tell your best friend that you're an alien is when she's completely drunk XD

Can't wait to see her reaction, don't think she'll take it all that seriously in her present condition.

I wonder what's Travin's problem with her? I would assume that being brothers with Tad and Tad knows Delia so well, he'd have a first hand truthful source of information about her rather than believing the gossip columns.

Can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Peace, Love and Happiness! :)

Bubbly Girl

Added to my faves!

Yo, nice chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Hihi I find the idea for the story quite interesting. The first chapter is pretty good in content, but there was quite a few grammatical mistakes I think.

For example:

The sharp, sculpted cheeks that had melted the panties women all over the world flushed a bright red.

Do you mean, melted the panties of women, or melted the panties off women?

There was a couple other ones that I noticed when I was reading but I don't remember where they were.

Other than the small typo/grammar mistakes, I think the story have potential and I'm very interested in reading more!

Hi,

I really like this so far. It's very well written and the characters are entertaining to say the least. As for the concept, it reminds of Hitchhikers Guide to the Universe and I am definitely looking forward to what adventures you take this array of characters on.

Look forward to the next chapter,

Garneau.