|Reviews for The Diary of TJ|
| understand 8/21/11 . chapter 9
| understand 8/21/11 . chapter 2
I would just like to point out that for his age: 15 it says (as of march 1st) but his DOB is December 20th
| TokioJapon 8/14/11 . chapter 9
| specialblend 5/15/11 . chapter 7
"Cam agreed to practice with us! You guys are pretty lucky, considering you're playing with a real star." Coach was beaming down on Cam, who smiled with the confidence of Justin Bieber.
hahahaha. that was great. I'm really liking all these references, and i actually think this story is pretty realistic, compared to some of the ones i read.
| specialblend 5/15/11 . chapter 6
omg black swan...haha best movie... ever.
but yeah, nice story, keep it up.
| TokioJapon 5/7/11 . chapter 8
is cam gay?
| TokioJapon 5/7/11 . chapter 7
I really love how you had Ryan described. It seems like a story like this would be vice versa among the twins. I wonder what he'd think if he found TJ's journal!
| tokiojapon 5/7/11 . chapter 5
I was really getting turned off but this chapter made it alot better.
| tokiojapon 5/7/11 . chapter 4
This story is all kinds of unrealistic, but it is interesting.
| Rainbow35 5/7/11 . chapter 9
This is a really good story and I love it! :D I'd written a review with some things I was wondering about, but all the writing deleted itself, so I'm just writing this short review instead. :P
Update soon! :D
| m 4/29/11 . chapter 8
love it! could you describe the twins a little more-personality, features,etc. i love that the story is in ontario.
| m 4/29/11 . chapter 1
write more... I love it!
| Daniel Wren 4/15/11 . chapter 6
So, I didn't want to write a review until I finished the chapters, so here I am finally! Please keep going! I love this. If I read correctly though, this is a sequel? Hm, Ill have to go digging around for it then ) My only criticism is that since this is a diary, I would love to see more characterization from TJ. I want to know his deepest emotions, which I think you could make easily more clear. Keep writing, please )
| luvvs2dream 4/14/11 . chapter 6
The soccer team are a bunch of idiots T_T
I'm really liking this story, its serious and funny at the same time.
Hope you get good feedback ;)
| triplet-lemon 3/27/11 . chapter 3
that was so wrong in so many ways