This gave me a laugh - it was amusing. Couple of grammar errors, but great job anyway.

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StoryMonster

PS. Could you please replay via Yours Truly, an Indian Pessimist? Thanks!

Jay Prior. I like that name - it's got a nice ring to it. The actual person, though . . . I've never heard of train surfing before this, and now I know it's a good thing I've never heard of it. It sounds really dangerous, and the fact that Jay was willing to try it really says a lot about him.

Okay, I decided to go ahead and review this since you requested it on the U Write it forum.

I thought that your portrayal of Jay is quite a funny. There were some grammar/spelling issues, but the piece still gave me a good laugh.