|Reviews for c5|
| Faithless Juliet 6/25/11 . chapter 1
Again, you create the two intermingling worlds here, which I really like. Loved the idea of the whale boned carrier and the illusions to a journey.
Only real complaint is just that its a bit spread out - I think you could have contained the idea a bit more, not condenced but maybe tightened the edges of narration a bit.