i really really like this. very cute, pretty and well written :)

Wow. That was beautiful. I interpreted it as though you were talking about a mother and her child...

And the poem had a very soft gentle feel to it that I liked.

Loved the lines, 'And our hearts complying to the newfound fact that they could never part.'

Moving and emotional as always. Genius :)

This was simply gorgeous; I loved it. You've used some brilliant vocabulary and imagery here, it's a fantastic poem.

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wow! this is really beautiful! i can't wait to see more!

I thought that the poem was very much feel of feeling even though it was short. Don't ask why but I can picture this haha.