Interesting. I like the combination of tragedy with softness. The title itself is unique. Great job.

Pretty interesting (and amusing) way of putting it. xD

I liked the concept, as I mentioned, and the only drawback I noticed was the all-small-letters thing.

If you had written it using correct punctuation and stuff, it'd have been perfect.

Nice one!

StoryMonster

PS. Could you please return this via Your's Truly, an Indian Pessimist?

Thanks!