Well, I thought it was very good :D I love sad poems. My advice, there were some places where it seemed the rhyme was forced. But otherwise it was very lovely...and sad. I hope you feel more cheery after getting some emotions out.

I really loved your Story, I thought it was well written and I enjoyed reading it.

I would love if you would read my story Breath Me Free From This Pain and review it!

Bye : )