|Reviews for Borderlands|
| BestOfTheWorst 3/29/11 . chapter 1
I enjoyed the detail you put into this, and the dialogue was exceptional. You did a great job of making your story immersive. I have to agree with the previous reviewer on the point of the sex scene, in that it seemed pretty pointless, though I didn't find it bad enough to actually detract from the experience.
You hinted at the setting and situation in this chapter; maybe you could focus on the characterization of our Outlander in the next?
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| jj1027 3/29/11 . chapter 1
Not bad at all, you painted a great and detailed scene, and I really liked your writing style. The entire thing was very interesting, and I can't wait to read more. However, I must say that the sex scene at the end was just pointless to an obscene degree, and gave nothing to the story. I have to say that it actually put me off from the story quite a bit, being as it served no narrative purpose that I can see. I'd suggest cutting it out.