|Reviews for You have forgotten|
| Ahrlaedrin 3/29/11 . chapter 1
I take that this is about some guy you had a crush on really badly, you wanted his attention, but as usual; he was too much of an idiot to realize you liked him
HOW THE HECK DO MEN WORK? It's like, "Oh hey! I like to be really brash and show I have a crush on you- oh no! I scared you away, but now you're giving me subtle hints you like me so you won't scare me, but I don't notice that! Heehee!" Seriously. Seriously. He wasn't even worth your time if he was like that, I mean it! I suggest you better off without him if he chose some pretty woman with no personality over someone that is pretty and has a personality. It's like, what? What?
Okay, my rant is over, really; it is. I swear, I will now stop obsessing over your poem and try to fight the urge to write one in your honour once more, because you're awesome, Sora. I swear. :D
| Thoth Tarot 3/29/11 . chapter 1
good impact, the desperation and desire came across really well. good work
| SargentLooneyPencil 3/29/11 . chapter 1
WOW... wowowowow.. great job.. i felt your emotions... great job. .excellent...!