I read Mud Bath, then this story, and almost skipped reviewing because I thought you'd have at least a hundred reviews, but nooooo, so I decided to review. I really like the humorous details, small actions that built up the characters. I like the boldness of the uncomplicated plot. Light and fluffeh, with just a hint of "Wait, what!?" and maybe some knowing smirks.

I have to admit, I sorta thought that Jared set it up to get just that reaction. lol It was a cute little story.

D'aw this story is cute. And I must say that Clara reminds me of someone. But anyhoo. Love the story.

HELL YES!

Sorry, but that was completely necessary. This story is adorable and amazing in every way. I could read about these two for hours. And funnily enough, I actually like Clara. I hope you post more of your work, I think you're brilliant.

Wow, you have no idea how much I love you right now. Jesse is completely awesome, and I love that his name's Jessica. I'm crossing my fingers and hoping Ryan likes him back!

BAW they're so cute

I read the chapters backwards. I can't believe it. I'm such a dipstick. Ignore. EVERYTHING. my last review said. Except the luck and the good chapter part. zomg. Today is not my day.

Okay, so this is amusing. Even if jealous emo boy is jealous. Sometimes that just makes them sexier. Cheers on your two-shot.

Luck again.

ibbit

Jealous emo boy is jealous. And aggressive o.o*

What will the second half hold! :D

Great half, funny/cute and all that jazz. but, I've no idea what either of these look like, except the small details that I had to guess. I'm not asking for a picture, I'm asking for.. I don't know. Something a little more.

Luck writing!

ibbit