|Reviews for I'll come when you've prayed|
| Smileyface33 4/22/11 . chapter 1
I read the review you made of my poem so I thought I would check out some of your work. This is seriously a great poem. It has a little trouble when you repeated the word care, but the rhyming is rather good. The message of this poem is very awesome. Take my word, I think you should consider being a poet.
| A Hopeless Romantic 3/31/11 . chapter 1
I think this is really good. I don't think rhyming is always necessary. I like the flow and the message. Good job!
| vampric-panda 3/31/11 . chapter 1
i think its really good.
| Ahrlaedrin 3/31/11 . chapter 1
In this review
I'll prove to you
What you've proven to me
I don't suck, and neither do you
I will tell you now
With fail help
That you made a little mistake
It's not too deep to delve
Cease means to stop,
And the sentence was a contradiction
"And when that rain ceases to stop,
I'll create a little rainbow for you"
Should it not be
And when the rain begins to cease?
The ending part
Was beautiful indeed
It is so sad
That it was the end!
My mindset is unbent,
I will admit this now
I think the poem was lovely
And you should know
If I'm good at poems
Then you are too!