I really like this poem.

I love the how this poem is not the usual love poem. Not all problems are fixed becuase some big guy comes in and kisses her and everything goes away. I like that.

Becuase thats not the way in real life, and not the way of your poem.

Instead, she decided for herself that she would not let him hold her back (this is what I am getting from it?). I like that there is not a happy ending. The words are really powerful.

You may have noticed its me again. A reveiw for a reveiw. Becase even though I have math homework screaming at me from my desk, you took the time to reveiw something of mine, so I will do the same for you. (if you want me to go away, please feel free to say so though. I dont want to be some annoying girl who keeps reveiwing and wont leave you alone. If i am becoming this, let me know)

Keep on writing,

Kezi