I really enjoy this but I don't understand it /:

You just lost the game. (;

Woah, that's pretty amazing. How can you convey so much emotion and information in three paragraphs and a poem?

hm...i want to see more

Very nice. Pretty simple and short, yet you express a lot in that short time, and set a very powerful atmosphere. Haunting and a little disturbing, and at the same time a sad tale of what could be the ordinary life of a desperate woman.

Good story! :)