I love it!I think you should sounds so interesting!Anyway,I can't wait for more! :)

Sincerely Yours,

Twilight Chick :)

I really like it! I think you should continue! I'm really interested on what will go on next! Seriously. A few things rubbed me the wrong way but this does NOT mean that you should change them. One: I don't know why but I don't think 'iridescence' is used in the correct context. I've never seen it used in that form so I am probably wrong. (It's ok to put me in my place :] ) Two: Purple eyes bother me. It just seems every character and their mother on here has purple eyes. Other than me being totally whiney, I really, really, really love this prologue! Update soon! Pwease? :3